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Destroyed, but not defeated... by ~ToothFairy88:iconToothFairy88:





Rejected by the human race,
Myself to face,
Mirrors scare me,
Longing to be free,
Beauty lies within,
Not on a bare skin,
To see what they saw,
Is a tragedy when you know my history...

Life has taken me,
To the gates of hell,
Scared me by memories,
Took my joy away,
Destroyed a good mind,
Before it was even born...
To see what they saw,
It's hunting me till today...

Saving me with truth,
Holding reality too close,
Myself to heal,
Getting back what is real,
They wished me dead,
But I'm still here,
Thanks you made me,
Afraid of my own face.
©2005-2010 ~ToothFairy88
:icontoothfairy88:

Author's Comments

This is just some depressed writing... I was bullied for a long time and I try to write if off me and deal with it.

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:iconspookykidplath:
This has to be one of the most emotional griping poems I've read in long time.
I could already relate a little before on the subject, but this poem Forces you to relate even more.Keep up the great writing-Jason

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You do not do, you do not do
Any more, black shoe .
-Sylvia Plath
:icontough-tits:
That's beautiful, you're beautiful for expressing it and trying to deal with it. Bullying is something that happens throughout life, all the time, because some people's instinct to compete is stronger than any sense of compassion.

That's a reduction however, not an excuse. If it was left to me I'd break the face of every person who would cause someone else pain out of spite.

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You are not a beautiful and unique snowflake, you are the same decaying organic matter as everyone else. You are not special.

~Tyler Durden
:iconbedimmed:
:hug:

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bubble bubble.
still here.
:iconsweetbeer:
This is so deep.I could actually feel my heart breaking.It's truly sad.Those last two lines got me.But this is beautiful, truly. :hug:

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Even if you stretch your "Loser" muscles...you still won't be cool enough to be a LOSER:evillaugh::sarcasm:
:iconcooper12345:
oh my god i love it...going to add it to my favs

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"Life beats down and crushes the soul and art reminds you that you have one."
~Stella Adler
:iconsammy-jo:
Great poem I can realte to this at the minute I am destroyed but not yet defeated but then again maybe we are we just don't realise it???

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I don't create poetry I create myself for me my poems are a way to me.
EDITH SODERGRAN. :rose:

Damien Rice

''Stones taught me to fly
Love taught me to lie
Life taught me to die
So it's not
:iconzzpreciouzz:
I liked it..really deep.. good work. :)

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